Hello, piece made with Krtia 2.4.git-master. N-joy.

Title: Obey



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http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/732/obeyz.png

Zoiks! That's awesome N-pigeon!Love the composition!

Nice brush textures, too!

Impressive work!

Thanks guys, I'm glad you like it.


I'm really getting along with Krita. Thank you Devs! Boud, Lukas, Cyrille and others!

Very good job ; and good painterly feeling. I also like the usage of pure black.

My little feedback, I think your scene could go further with better trees around ( or bluring this one ).
Also the higher bright value would works better on the item of the wizard ( you already brighten it ). For the moment, on the value the horizon sky keeps eye attraction. ( but thanks your circular compo the eyes keeps focused ). Also , I think your painterly effect could be sharpened a little bit. All of this -of course- are just crits according my taste.

Thanks Deevad for very good feedback!
I will try correct some things latter and I will play around with your advices and bugs that I spotted.
I'm still new for illustration, I worked mostly with portraits for concept art, so any feedback from viewers is big help for me. What they like and what not.

Thanks again everybody

The one niggly little thing that bugs me about the composition is where the griffon's knee goes behind the wizzards head, which I find a bit distracting. I can't help but feel that just the tiniest amount of space, so, the wizard's outline was unbroken, would strengthen a great piece even more.

Here goes my 2 cents
1 Imo it could be better if you keep some blank space over the wing.
2 This area can be confuse, maybe a wing , maybe an arm? colors are similar.
3 Smoke .This surface is not clear, which type of surface is it?
4 Pure whites are very dangerous and there is not reflections for such big lightsource. where does it came from?
5 I dont know if the animal is jumping, flying ...

Overall i like the result, a restricted palette is a good idea to these dark type pictures. and i like the head and the oval composition.

RamonMiranda wrote:Here goes my 2 cents
1 Imo it could be better if you keep some blank space over the wing.
2 This area can be confuse, maybe a wing , maybe an arm? colors are similar.
3 Smoke .This surface is not clear, which type of surface is it?
4 Pure whites are very dangerous and there is not reflections for such big lightsource. where does it came from?
5 I dont know if the animal is jumping, flying ...

Overall i like the result, a restricted palette is a good idea to these dark type pictures. and i like the head and the oval composition.

Really good feedback, Ramon

I love this work is very interesting and I love the theme.
I find the picture perfect, I love it!
I like it so much I wanted to do a little retouching to highlight different areas of illumination of the image is just an idea if you want to tweak your work.

Congratulations, I love it.
I hope you do not mind to play with your work
kisses
Yuli

Thanks for comments folks! I'm happy that you like it

@Yuli_bcn
Of course I don't have nothing against over-paintings I do a lot of them myself

Hi,

Really good work, bravo. Comments Deevad and Ramon are very relevant. The suggestion is very interesting Yuli_bcn

Interesting topic, both for the original painting as for the answers…