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I'm not sure what effect you're going for which makes a critique here difficult. That said, I found that it took quite a bit of staring at the image before clearly making out shapes and what was happening. Maybe this is intentional. If not, I would suggest a clearer delineation between background, subject and foreground. Right now, they're all reasonably similar.
That said I love the roghness of the linework, and the texture even in the darker areas. |
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