Full:
https://yadi.sk/d/tTAt_DT6Yk2-8w/Rainbow_Banana.png

It's a bit visually noisy.

Can I suggest you maybe try versions with colours considerably toned down, we don't want to distract a user from their open windows.

david_edmundson wrote:It's a bit visually noisy.

Can I suggest you maybe try versions with colours considerably toned down, we don't want to distract a user from their open windows.

Is that better? Or need more monotonously? Also i can make it bigger

I think that it's a bit better, but I still think that you should remove some more saturation.
It may also feel a little bit cluttered to some, so I would recommend zooming in a little bit if this is some sort of vector. Cutting off the edges could also lead to a little less of a claustrophobic effect.

Other than that, though, I think that it's good!

I think that it will be better than the first version.
Can you replace my first job for a new one?
Full: https://yadi.sk/d/qTBfdz-413njbQ

The latest version is better, but still suffers from the issues I pointed out in your Triangularity entry. For both, I would recommend reducing contrast, brightness, and the sharpness of the transitions between elements.

ngraham wrote:The latest version is better, but still suffers from the issues I pointed out in your Triangularity entry. For both, I would recommend reducing contrast, brightness, and the sharpness of the transitions between elements.

Agreed.

Update



Full: https://yadi.sk/d/gYw8lfQ_jnIv6w

The theme has moved down and my update went unnoticed, this message is to raise the topic

I hope that my updated version is involved

I like the updated version quite a bit. Glad to see that you stuck with it!

I updated your submission with the latest one

It is not displayed, maybe need to re-upload to the host


Link: https://i.imgur.com/mjebc7Z.png

I hope that the wallpaper does not displayed in the list will not prevent participation