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CaceK
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Altum

Wed May 29, 2019 9:47 pm
Hi!
My 1st submission:

Altum
CC BY-SA
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5k: https://ibb.co/FmrCJHk

Source blend file (open with blender 2.8 ):
https://we.tl/t-HGuaFNogmb

Last edited by CaceK on Fri May 31, 2019 5:15 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Altum

Wed May 29, 2019 9:50 pm
Great, but could you make the cyan on the top and bottom quite a bit darker?
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Re: Altum

Wed May 29, 2019 9:54 pm
It would also be nice if you could swap the color logic to be dark on the outside and cyan inside.
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Re: Altum

Wed May 29, 2019 10:14 pm
Update:

ALTUM
https://ibb.co/FmrCJHk

I made the colors a bit more subdued.
I'll edit the original post as well.


@GB_2
Sadly, reversing the colors would require a re-render and it would take too long on my PC to finish before competition ends.
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Re: Altum

Thu May 30, 2019 1:39 pm
The panel of judges has decided to do a quick second round with our favorites, and I have congratulations to offer: Altum has been chosen as a finalist! In the next 2 days, we would like to help you polish up your wallpaper, and to that effect we have some detailed feedback:

- Since you now have a bit more time (2 days) try inverting the color logic, making the foreground dark with a colorful cyan bolt through it
- Make these kinds of corners beveled rather than sharp on the outside: https://i.imgur.com/34GbPEE.png
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Re: Altum

Thu May 30, 2019 2:10 pm
I'm glad you like it. I'll get right to it.
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 1:34 am
Ok, I made the suggested changes:

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5k: https://ibb.co/wCjGgTK


Is the brightness/contrast ok?
I'm still experimenting with some details so feel free to suggest anything.
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 3:06 am
Wow I just love the new background colors! However the now greenish bolt through the center isn't doing it so much for me. But I feel like the original dark bolt would look stunning with the new background colors. What do you think?
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 3:07 am
Come to think of it, that would make it a lot like Onyx. I bet Onyx would look amazing with these background colors too.
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 4:52 am
Is it crashed plasmashell? :D
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 11:22 am
ngraham wrote:Wow I just love the new background colors! However the now greenish bolt through the center isn't doing it so much for me. But I feel like the original dark bolt would look stunning with the new background colors. What do you think?

I think you're right. The bolt came out too green. Made some changes to make it more cyan. Also, I improved some bevels and made some workflow changes so that I can change the colors without re-render. I'm posting three variants for now. I would appreciate some feedback.
In the meantime I'll tinker with the Onyx.

A - more cyan bolt
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5k: https://ibb.co/9Y7C14p

B - colors closer to the original bolt
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5k: https://ibb.co/cXX86Mx

C - dark blue variant
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5k: https://ibb.co/2jqM37h
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 2:32 pm
Magnificent! B is my favorite.

Is there any way you can reduce the file size without losing quality? It's 10.5 MB which is rather large.
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 2:49 pm
Oh and two more things:
- Which version of CC-BY-SA?
- We will need your real name and email address for attribution purposes.
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Re: Altum

Fri May 31, 2019 5:01 pm
I tried to optimize the size and the best lossless compression I could manage is around 9.5MB. 5K resolution and smooth transitions are making it hard to do. I wouldn't want to introduce any banding with lossy compression but if it is necessary I'll try.
I also modified the blue version a bit.

Would "Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International (CC BY-SA 4.0)" be ok?
Or would "CC BY 4.0" be preferable? I'm not good with licenses and I don't want to potentially restrict KDE team.

Contact info:
Krystian Zajdel
krystian[dot]zajdel[at]gmail[dot]com




Lossless - optimized:
A - preview in previous post
5K: https://ibb.co/9HjLmpY

B - preview in previous post
5K: https://ibb.co/vxZBqYx

D - a modified version of C
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5K: https://ibb.co/x7H337F


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