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4k image: https://postimg.cc/fVJZTh1t Old variant 4k image: https://postimg.cc/VSPtFyTw Alternate variant: Alternate variant 4k image: https://postimg.cc/SYCBLMny Volna means wave in Russian.
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Nicely done! I like the under-used orange color, which is quite a pleasant shade here.
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I've updated my original submission, this new variant has both waves being flat.
I like both variants though, can't choose which one I like more D: A link to the 4k version is in the edited post.
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I like the old one more.
Or if maybe the outer wave was like the inner one in the old design, and the inner wave was flat... Worth a try. |
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I think I prefer the original version too. It's the motion and realism in the 2nd wave that really makes it so good.
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Some feedback from the judges:
This wallpaper is really good. The only problems that I could see are the fact that prospective is a bit confused, and it's not clear what's the point of view, which appears to be really close to the beach itself; But that's just an impression and I think that the overall wallpaper is not damaged by this. There's a wise use of noise. Maybe I would experiment with various light sources (currently very well used) and colors (e.g.: using a more blue-ish color for the parts of the wave that are currently white) or shapes (e.g. making the wave thinner). Oh my... this wallpaper looks beautiful. I really can't find much to say about this one that's bad... if anything it looks kinda weird how there's a white line part-way through the tide, IMHO, but to be fair that's how it works in real life anyway so, yeah. Only other thing I can think of is maybe make the tide starting point's 'hill' a tad lower. |
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I might try to make a night version, if I have time for that
Last edited by raveomelette on Sun Jan 19, 2020 3:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Made some changes to the upper-right corner, color and height of the wave.
4k: https://postimg.cc/fVJZTh1t |
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Hi, one of the judges here with some feedback on your wallpaper.
This is a decidedly calm wallpaper—even the blues give off a warm and inviting hue, like a summer beach. I feel like some peripheral blur around the edges would give an even more tranquil feel to the wallpaper. |
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