Sound preview: https://soundcloud.com/im_akashii/sets/ ... XtJQHSNuEt

Original files: https://www.mediafire.com/file/gmjww09e ... i.zip/file
Files with changes: https://www.mediafire.com/file/f3517npw ... th+changes).zip/file
more info in the file text info

all sounds are released under a CC-BY license

Details: just one of the kicks was made by me, specifically in 'Risingtone' with the 'Monstro' plugin
Extra sounds have been the result of experimenting when making the main sounds and I have left them for having good quality

Hi Akashii. Thank you for submitting your sounds!

What licencing are you using for distributing your sounds? If you want to participate on this contest, you need to to choose any license you prefer from the ones listed in the rules:

5. Your audio collection, and any other files sent must be released to KDE under a copyleft license (CC-BY, CC-BY-SA), or released into the public domain or equivalent (CC0).

You don't have to do anything, just say which one you prefer so we can know in what terms you are distributing your creations (CC-BY, CC-BY-SA, CC0 or Public Domain).

I also noticed you used some samples included in LMMS that are not compatible with the licensing we need. I took the liberty of searching for replacement samples in the public domain to suggest you. Of course that's just a suggestion. If you want to use other public domain samples (you can download more here), feel free to change them. You can download the folder containing all of them here: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/ ... sp=sharing

I made a list with my suggestions:

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Akashii:

Ringtone 1

kick04.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/DWSD/sounds/171104/
snare01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/AlexIero_1/sounds/387186/
hihat_opened01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/blakengouda/sounds/509985/
hihat_closed01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/gashasound/sounds/470916/

Risingtone

kick20.wav to https://freesound.org/people/DWSD/sounds/171104/
bassdrum02.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/deleted_user_2195044/sounds/195747/
snare01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/AlexIero_1/sounds/387186/
clap01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/dtrostli/sounds/316875/
ride01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/twentytwentymusic/sounds/439836/
hihat_closed01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/gashasound/sounds/470916/
hihat_opened01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/blakengouda/sounds/509985/
hihat_opened02.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/cabled_mess/sounds/339297/
clap04.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/wlabarron/sounds/507934/

Moe Ringtone

kick01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/nabz871/sounds/191292/
snare01.ogg to https://freesound.org/people/AlexIero_1/sounds/387186/

After that you can simply replace the samples in the project files and re-export them.


Once again, thank you for submitting your sounds, we really appreciate your work.

You provided multiple alrams and ringtones so I will just comment on my favorite: alarm-01 and alarm-02.
I think the first loops too early. Maybe it should fade for the whole bar.
The second is a bit too loud in the second half of bars 4 and 8. Mallets is to blame here since it is amplifying certain notes, so I suggest reducing the volume of the problematic notes.

I do not like keyboard 01 because it lacks the click/transient that keyboard 02 and keyboard 03 have.
Your choice of glass-like sounds here instead of plastic- or wood-like sounds (like in screen lock) is interesting. I think they sound okay; users will type by tapping on a glass screen after all.

I like sms-00 and sms-01.

I think the extra sounds are cool, especially screen lock. But, as you noted in iNFO.txt, they are extras so they are not judged.

Thank you very much for the reply
I apologize, I could not specify much about the license and others because just at that moment my internet connection was expiring x'D
so, I will make the possible modifications and try to have everything ready by then
Thank you

akashii wrote:Thank you very much for the reply
I apologize, I could not specify much about the license and others because just at that moment my internet connection was expiring x'D
so, I will make the possible modifications and try to have everything ready by then
Thank you

Hi! Today is the last day of the submission phase and we'll start the judging phase. The second phase will last until the next Sunday (20), so if you want to replace the samples or make any changes to your sounds, please do so before 20th of June. If for some reason you are unable to replace the samples and the judges choose any of the sounds with the "bad" samples, we will try to replace and re-export them ourselves (that means they might sound different than they currently do).

Thank you Akashii for participating, and good luck!

updated!!

https://www.mediafire.com/file/f3517npw ... th+changes).zip/file