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Volna

Sun Jan 12, 2020 12:42 am
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4k image: https://postimg.cc/fVJZTh1t

Old variant 4k image: https://postimg.cc/VSPtFyTw

Alternate variant:
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Alternate variant 4k image: https://postimg.cc/SYCBLMny

Volna means wave in Russian.

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Sun Jan 12, 2020 6:11 am
Nicely done! I like the under-used orange color, which is quite a pleasant shade here.
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Sun Jan 12, 2020 9:40 am
This is so amazing!
I could see this as the default in 5.18!
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Mon Jan 13, 2020 2:25 pm
Registered to say Thank you!
I've found my new wallpaper :)
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Mon Jan 13, 2020 2:45 pm
The realism in the color patterns on the waves is fantastic.
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Tue Jan 14, 2020 3:32 am
I've updated my original submission, this new variant has both waves being flat.
I like both variants though, can't choose which one I like more D:
A link to the 4k version is in the edited post.
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Tue Jan 14, 2020 11:29 am
Oh, nice, I like the new one even more!
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Tue Jan 14, 2020 7:58 pm
I like the old one more.
Or if maybe the outer wave was like the inner one in the old design, and the inner wave was flat... Worth a try.
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Wed Jan 15, 2020 9:02 pm
I think I prefer the original version too. It's the motion and realism in the 2nd wave that really makes it so good.
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Thu Jan 16, 2020 8:04 pm
Congratulations! This wallpaper were selected as a finalist!
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Sat Jan 18, 2020 11:07 pm
Some feedback from the judges:
This wallpaper is really good. The only problems that I could see are the fact that prospective is a bit confused, and it's not clear what's the point of view, which appears to be really close to the beach itself; But that's just an impression and I think that the overall wallpaper is not damaged by this. There's a wise use of noise. Maybe I would experiment with various light sources (currently very well used) and colors (e.g.: using a more blue-ish color for the parts of the wave that are currently white) or shapes (e.g. making the wave thinner).
Oh my... this wallpaper looks beautiful. I really can't find much to say about this one that's bad... if anything it looks kinda weird how there's a white line part-way through the tide, IMHO, but to be fair that's how it works in real life anyway so, yeah. Only other thing I can think of is maybe make the tide starting point's 'hill' a tad lower.
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Re: Volna

Sun Jan 19, 2020 3:36 pm
I might try to make a night version, if I have time for that

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Re: Volna

Sun Jan 19, 2020 3:36 pm
Made some changes to the upper-right corner, color and height of the wave.
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4k: https://postimg.cc/fVJZTh1t
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Mon Jan 20, 2020 5:16 am
This is just lovely.
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Tue Jan 21, 2020 9:54 pm
Hi, one of the judges here with some feedback on your wallpaper.

This is a decidedly calm wallpaper—even the blues give off a warm and inviting hue, like a summer beach. I feel like some peripheral blur around the edges would give an even more tranquil feel to the wallpaper.

 
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